Question

近期，雾霾天气频频发生，PM2.5（可入肺颗粒物）与PM10（可吸入颗料物）这两个此前不被人熟知的词最近一直被许多人提及，环境保护越来越受到人们的关注。作为一名青少年，我们如何尽可能自己的微薄之力来保护环境，请以学生会的名义发出一个倡议。

要点；

1、环保受到人们更多的关注；

2、环境的现状；

3、应采取的措施。

提示：雾霾天气：Dust-haze weather

注意：词数120词左右（格式已给出，不计入总词数）。

My fellow students,

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

The Students’Union

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

One possible version:

Recently , the Dust-haze weather hit the north of China over and over again, which had a great effect on people’s life and health. As a result, people are becoming more and more concerned about our environment. As we all know, it’s the development of industry and heavy traffic jams that have caused air pollution. So as a teenager, I think we should take some measures to protect our environment.

On one hand, we’d better launch a campaign to raise people’s awareness of environmental protection. Also we can hold a speech contest about protecting environment to stress the importance of living a low- carbon life. On the other hand, do what we can to influence people around us to go to work or school on foot or by bike. As far as I’m concerned, every small step we take really counts. So please remember: together, individuals can make a difference.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，首先要认真阅读题目。近期，雾霾天气频频发生，PM2.5（可入肺颗粒物）与PM10（可吸入颗料物）这两个此前不被人熟知的词最近一直被许多人提及，环境保护越来越受到人们的关注。作为一名青少年，我们如何尽可能自己的微薄之力来保护环境，请以学生会的名义发出一个倡议。可知这是一篇倡议书，且需要用第一人称来写。需要写的内容提纲已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求词数120词左右，写的字数不要太多，也不能太少。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。