假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线(___)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.

I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.

为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。

内容要点如下：

1．表示理解并给予安慰；

2．提出建议并说明理由。

注意：

1．词数120左右；

2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪

Hi Worried.:

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.

Yours,

Jamie

In order not to get into trouble, advertisers are increasingly cautious about taking out ads ______(aim) at children.

—You need to start exercising again, I guess.

—Well, I have been attempting ________ (eat) less recently. But as you know, my mother is such a good cook.

—Did he say anything that appealed ________ you especially?

—Not really. Actually I slept halfway through his speech.

It's typical ________ him to set his aim high but do little, so he is always leaving things undone.

________ coincidence, John and I were born on the same day of the same year, and we have a lot in common.

—Your sister nearly devoted all her spare time ________ her study during the three years.

—That's right, or she ________ (take) first place in her school in the College Entrance Examination.

—I heard that he grew worse after taking the medicine.

—Yes. He was allergic________ to it.

The young teacher wants to help his students as much as he can, but ________ the other hand, he'd better help them learn on their own.