文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改；在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处， 多者（从11处起）不记分。

 One afternoon, I was doing my homework, suddenly I heard someone knocking at

the door. I rose my head, looking out of the window to see who it was. The man of

about 50 with broad shoulders and glasses were standing on the door steps. He was

tall, wearing in an old army coat. He grew a wild beard. A big black hat was pulling

forward over his eyes so that it was hard to see his face clear. His shoes were old and

worn out. It was a big hole in one of his socks. He had with him a black box in one

hand. Only after I took a few more closer look at him I recognize that he used to be

my neighbor ten years age.

The vegetables grown in this district are much better than ____ in that district.

  A. /   B. that   C. ones   D. those

You may have your own decision on this matter, and I have little doubt_______ you will succeed.

       A. if                     B. whether                    C. that                         D. what

Susan was expecting her favourite singers, but to her disappointment, ____ appeared.

A. some                B. none                        C. everyone                  D. no one

In any family with more than one child, chidren seem to naturally compete for their parents’ love and attention. Parents say they love every child equally. But is that true?

       Susan, founder of a consulting firm in Chicago, interviewed 216 women and found that even though none of her questions asked directly about a parent favoring one child over another, about two-thirds of the women said there was a favored child. And they also remembered their experience when they were young. One of the women said, “My mother always liked my brother better, and he got to go to summer camp in 1968 and I didn’t.”

       Plumez, who interviewed parents with both biological children and adoptive children for an adoption book in 2008, found that what matters most is whether your temperaments(性情) are pleasing. “In some cases, parents would say they felt closer to their adopted children,” she says, “Some parents like the children with characters similar to theirs. Two people who are shy and withdrawn might get along well, unless the shy parent doesn’t like that aspect of themselves and they try to push the naturally withdrawn child to be more extroverted.”

       It could be a result of gender, birth order or how easy or difficult a child’s temperament may be, but a parent’s different treatment has far-reaching effects. Students have found that less-favored children may suffer emotionally, with decreased self-esteem and behavioral problems in childhood. Favoritism is a reason for the next generation not to like each other.

       Experts say it is not realistic to say everyone should be treated equally, because no two people are the same and they relate differently to others.

       “It does not mean that parent loves or likes one child more. It has to do with which one of them is independent,” says psychologist Laurie Kramer of the University of Illinois.

The study carried out by Susan shows that ______.

       A. showing favoritism is common in many families

       B. most mothers like their sons better than their daughters

       C. only two-thirds of the women interviewed have more than a child

       D. it is a favoritism that leads to absence of harmony in most families

The underlined word “extroverted” in the third paragraph means _______.

       A. independent              B. outgoing           C. clever               D. brave

What can we infer from the passage?

       A. Favoritism is not beneficial to the development of children

       B. Parents’ favoritism to a certain child can’t be avoided in families

       C. Parents may be favoring one of their children and don’t realize it

       D. People are very much shaped by how they were treated by their parents

What is the best title for the passage?

       A. Parents’ favoritism can affect children deeply

       B. Why do parents show favoritism to children?

       C. Parents should give attention to all their children

       D. Building a harmonious family is important to children

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（ √ ）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

    此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

    此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（   ），在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

Born to be the basketball player, Kobe Bryant                                        __________

showed his shooting talent in an early age. He has always                       __________

occupied with proving his skills on the court and improving                    __________

himself. Having enjoyed a successfully high school basketball                 __________

career, Kobe went straight into the NBA after graduated. So                    __________

far, Kobe has led the Lakers to four NBA championships.                       __________

Thus, he is never content with his past achievements. He                         _________

is famous for getting his teammates stay up late practising.                            __________

When he learned a new move, he asks his teammates to practise              __________

it with him after it is perfect. “When you win, you have to                            __________

constantly look for ways to get better.” Kobe said.

Although this medicine can cure you _____ your illness, it has a bad effect _____ you.

A. for; in               B. for; on                            C. of; on                      D. of; at

We are interested in the weather because it ___ us so directly what we wear, what we do , and even how we feel.

 A. benefits    B. guides    C. affects  D. effects

－What do you think made Jane’s parents so disappointed?

－____________.

    A. She refused to live with them              

B. Her refusing to live with them

    C. Because she refused to live with them

    D. Since she refused to live with them

I wonder if ____ to come over to my family after work.

A. you are convenient                                B. it is convenient for you

C. it’s convenient of you                                   D. there’s convenient for you