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短文改错
假定英语课上老师要同学之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处）不计分。
Attention please, everyone. We accepted the weather forecast on the radio this morning that there will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure shut the windows and doors until you leave your classrooms. The winter sports meet that we planned to hold on tomorrow will be put off. After it becomes fine, we'll make other announcement. We will have classes on Thursday as usually. Since it is cold tomorrow, please put on more clothes in time. Those who comes to school by bike don't keep your umbrella open while riding.

第五部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：l、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2、只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分           
People like swimming in the summer because water makes them to feel cool. However, these years many people died while they were enjoyed themselves in water, and some of them were students. So some people are still not carefully in swimming. They often think they swim such well that nothing will happen on them in water. On hot summer days, if you will go swimming, remember that many good swimmer have died in water. They died because they were not careful, so don’t get into water when you are lonely. If you remember this, swimming will be safer.

第II卷(共35分)
第四部分: 写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节: 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Kate,
Although I’m 16 years old, but my father still treats                     76. ________
me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my opinions.                  77. ________
He is very strict with me and often punishes me about                    78. ________
leaving things lying around the house while he did this                   79. ________
all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to                      80. ________
follow. But he often says, “Doing as I say, not as I do.”                   81. ________
Even worse, he point out my past mistakes to guests,                    82. ________
making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t                     83. _______
bear what he does. I have been tried many times                        84. ________
to  to talk with he but he never listens. Please help me.                     85. ________
Yours,
Jane

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误,对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个(√);如果有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

此句多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此句缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此句错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

Several years before, Mrs. Green was a famous musician who taught       

1.         

the music at a college, and many of her students succeeded in their            2.         

business. Live with her husband at home now, Mrs. Green, in common         

3.         

as some old people, finds her memory is failing. Sometimes she forgets        4.        

what she has done or will do, that often gets her in trouble. Mr. Green          5.        

noticed it and persuaded her into see a famous doctor who lives               6.         

in the capital. He bought two tickets to London and then                     7.         

asked her to put it into her handbag while she was playing                     8.        

piano. When they reached the airport the next morning, the old                 9.        

woman said,“ If only I have brought my piano. I’ve left the tickets on it.”        10.        

短文改错：（共10处错误，每处0.5分，满分5分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：     1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
My dentist had just pulled out one of my tooth and had told me to rest for
while. My mouth was full with cotton wool. He knew I collected bird eggs and asks
me whether my collection was growing. He then asked me a lot of other question.
In answer to these questions, I could neither nod or make strange noises.
Meanwhile, my tongue was busy search out the hole where the tooth had been. I
suddenly felt very worried, so couldn’t say everything. When the dentist at last
removed the cotton wool, I was able to tell him of that he had pulled out the wrong
tooth.

五．短文改错（共8小题；每小题1分，满分8分）
文中共有8处语言错误，请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处辐一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改8处，多者（从第9处起）不计分。
Many years ago, I stepped into a bookstore for some books I wanted them. While I was there, I see a young boy of about 12 come into the store. The boy wanted to buy a geography book. Geography books paid one dollar each, but he had only 62 cents. I decided to follow him to see whether he could succeed. Four stores we entered, and four times he disappointed. Luckily at the five store he got an used book. Having learned why he wanted the book, and the bookseller gave him some writing papers and a new pencil as a gift.

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

That Saturday when I entered into an underpass, I       86．      

heard a beautiful sound. It makes me very happy.          87．     

It was darkness there, but I could judge where the sound     88．     

came. I walked towards a corner. An old man was sitting      89．     

there, wears shabby clothes. He was playing erhu, “Oh, it is         90．       

a beggar,” I thought. On that moment a man came by and dropped     91．     

one Yuan in the beggar box. The old man stopped          92．     

to say “Thank you”. He then groped (摸) on the ground.        93．     

While he found the box, he picked up the money. He felt      94．     

it and smiled. What beautiful the music was! It was      95．     

played by a blind person. I just admired him.          

短文改错（共10小；每小题1分；满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(＼)划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
原行没有错的不要改。
注意：本题所有的标记和答案都写在答题纸上。
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot. I was in great pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even refused the offer of help from my classmates. As the result, the hurt on my foot became worse. Now I know I am wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept their help. Someday we can help him in return. In this way, we can get along each other happily and peacefully.

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第II 卷（共35 分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错(满分10分)
April 24, 2010    Sunday                                    Sunny
Today is Sunday. I didn’t get up early as usually. In the morning after I finished my homework, I do some washing. Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited him to see a movie. And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema at 3 p.m., we found all the tickets had sold out. Then we went back to our school and played the football. After that, we were about to go home while we saw our English teacher, Mr. Zhao, come into the school. He told us we had made great progresses this term. He also suggested they read more and wrote more. We promised him that we would follow his advice.

短文改错（共10小题； 每小题1分， 满分10分）

Women are playing a much important part in society than before. Now women are working as teachers, scientists but even leaders. Almost all jobs that used to be done by men is done perfectly well by women. Women are no longer looked down in society. As the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. That is hard to find the wife is busy while the husband is sitting in an armchair, watches TV. Though there are a lot of changes, the great number of men still guard their rights. Sometimes few women are allowing to attend important meetings. This is the problem we should try to solve it now.

短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

After watch “English TV” last Sunday morning, I phoned to my classmate and told him to go to see a film in the afternoon. Before the film was over, we returned to school to do our lessons. While we are having a rest in the corridor, I saw Mr Liu, my head teacher. He told me that we had made some progresses in English, but my Chinese lagged behind, especially my Chinese composition. He suggested I must read more and keeping a diary every day. In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me well for improving composition writing. That was really good idea! What they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.

短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone could give the hand when someone else is in need.

第二节短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1.5分, 满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误. 对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√); 如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉.
此行缺一个词: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 在该行右边横线上写该加的词.
此行错一个词: 在错的词下划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词.
注意: 原行没有错的不要改.
A man with two bad burned ears went to see                            76.__________
a doctor.“What has happened on you?”asked the                77.__________
doctor.“Well, my wife is ironing(熨衣服) while                   78.__________
I was watching a ball game on TV. She put on the                    79.__________
hot iron near the telephone then my phone                          80.__________
rang .I answered the iron instead the phone.”                            81.__________
The doctor nodded.“But what has                                              82.__________
happened to other ear?” The man said,“ Before                 83.__________
I hanged it up, the same person called up                                 84.__________
again.” The doctor couldn't help laugh when he heard this.     85.__________

第Ⅱ卷(共35分)
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10 分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的此下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没错的不要改。 
While traveled to Paris on a bus, I became very sick.              76_______.              
A well-dressed man on the bus helped me greatly. He               77. ________              
took me off the bus, found out where the doctor’s office,            78._________               
and took me to there himself. The next day, he came to              79.________________               
visit me. I didn’t speak French well, so I can’t talk with              80._______               
him very much. However, even if we couldn’t talk, but              81. ___________              
we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks              82.___________               
to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern             83. ___________               
for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned              84. ___________              
that communication can take place with much actual language at all.   85. ____________         

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：请在答题卡上作答。

Dear Mr. Manager,

I’m writing to express my thank to you and your employee　　　　

________

Miss Li Hong who helped me found my handbag while I  　　　　　　

________

was shopping in your shop in March 24．                       　

________

That day I was greatly interesting and lost myself in enjoying　　　　　

________

a beautiful product. After I paid a pair of silk socks, I　　　　　　　

________

left my handbag on the counter. I have already walked out of　　　　　  ________

the shop then Miss Li came up with my handbag. I thanked          　    ________

her and offered her a reward of 20 dollars and she refused to　　　　

________

take even a cent. I deeply moved by her spirit. Miss Li’s　　　　　　　

________

good qualities are something I’ll always keep on in mind.         ________

短文改错(共l0小题；每小题1.5分，满分l5分)

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该

行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Have you ever been bored with the busy life in the city？If so，    1．___________

have glimpse of the primary forest with me. The breathtaking       2．___________

scenery make you forget everything when you’re exploring what      3．___________

the forest has to offer. With thousands of trees surrounded             4．___________

you，you will feel like to floating on the green ocean. Under the       5．___________

leaves are all kinds of flowers，peacefully and shy. And a          6．___________

variety of birds were singing happily in the trees. While you’re       7．___________

enjoying the scenery on the ground，watching out for the sky！  8．___________

It will give your eye a feast. Wandering alone in the forest，  9．___________

we will have the feeling of returning to nature.            10．___________

第二节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

A man went to an insurance office to have his life insured. The manager of the office ask him how old his parents were when they were died. “Mother had a bad heart and passed away at age of 30. Father died of tuberculosis (肺结核) when he was 35.” “I’ m very sorry,” said the manager, “We can’ t insure our life as your parents were not health” Disappointing, the man left the office. He met a clerk who had listened their talk. “You mustn’t be so frank and tell the truth.” said the clerk. “Not office will insure you if you speak like that. Use your imagination a little.” The man went to other office and was shown into the manager’ s room. “Well, young man, how old were your parents when they died?” “Mother was 93, and died while she was play football.” 

短文改错(共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1、每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It was Monday. Li Ming was the first come to the classroom. When he came into his seat, therefore, he found his bench was broken. Seen there was nobody around, he decided to change it with Wang Gang’s, and so he did. After a while, Wang Gang came. When he saw a broken bench, he carried it out of the classroom. Li Ming didn’t know how he was going to do. So Li Ming came out of and found that Wang Gang has begun to repair the broken bench. Li Ming’s face turn red. He said with Wang Gang, “Let’s repair them together.”

短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007．I was               【小题1】          
walking along Park Road towards the east while an                            【小题2】          
old man came out of the park on the other sides of the                        【小题3】          
street．Then I saw a yellow car to drive up and make a right               【小题4】          
turn into Park Road．The car hit the man while she                           【小题5】          
was crossing the road．He falls with a cry．The car drove off            【小题6】          
at full speed heading west．I noticed driver was a woman                   【小题7】          
wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864.                     【小题8】          
Two minutes late, I managed to stop a passing car, took the                 【小题9】          
old man to the nearest hospital but paid for his treatment.                   【小题10】