Now I'd like to introduce our English paper to you答案解析

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加.删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意: 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Now I’d like to introduce our English paper to you. On my opinion, the paper is very importance to our study and daily life. We can improve our English, especially writing English by reading it and writing. At the same time, it’s a fun and relaxing to read it, it makes our after-class time meaningful and colorful. There is a lot of columns in our paper, such as School News, Teachers’ Advice and Students’ Voice. Not only it make us learn the important events of our school, but helps ourselves communicate with teachers. However, we can take the advices from our teachers more seriously. In a word, I like our paper very much.

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加.删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意: 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Now I’d like to introduce our English paper to you. On my opinion, the paper is very importance to our study and daily life. We can improve our English, especially writing English by reading it and writing. At the same time, it’s a fun and relaxing to read it, it makes our after-class time meaningful and colorful. There is a lot of columns in our paper, such as School News, Teachers’ Advice and Students’ Voice. Not only it make us learn the important events of our school, but helps ourselves communicate with teachers. However, we can take the advices from our teachers more seriously. In a word, I like our paper very much.

短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
Now I’d like to introduce our English paper to you. On my opinion, the paper is very imptance to our study and daily life. We can improve our English, especially writing English by reading it and writing. At the same time, it’s a fun and relaxing to read it, it makes our after-class time meaningful and colorful. There is a lot of columns in our paper, such as School News, Teachers’Advice and Students’Voice.Not only it make us learn the important events of our school, but helps ourselves communicate with teachers. However, we can take the advices from our teachers more seriously. In a word, I like our paper very much.

短文改错 （共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）

Now I’d like to introduce our English paper to you. On my opinion, the paper is very imptance to our study and daily life. We can improve our English, especially writing English by reading it and writing. At the same time, it’s a fun and relaxing to read it, it makes our after-class time meaningful and colorful. There is a lot of columns in our paper, such as School News, Teachers’Advice and Students’Voice.Not only it make us learn the important events of our school, but helps ourselves communicate with teachers. However, we can take the advices from our teachers more seriously. In a word, I like our paper very much.

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加.删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意: 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

  Now I’d like to introduce our English paper to you. On my opinion, the paper is very importance to our study and daily life. We can improve our English, especially writing English by reading it and writing. At the same time, it’s a fun and relaxing to read it, it makes our after-class time meaningful and colorful. There is a lot of columns in our paper, such as School News, Teachers’ Advice and Students’ Voice. Not only it make us learn the important events of our school, but helps ourselves communicate with teachers. However, we can take the advices from our teachers more seriously. In a word, I like our paper very much.

你的澳大利亚笔友Tom发来电子邮件，向你询问国家体育馆“鸟巢”的有关信息。请你根据下列提示给Tom回一封电子邮件，简单介绍“鸟巢”。

[写作内容]

[写作要求]

1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2. 短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入句子总数；

3. 参考词汇：田径: track and field events    观众: spectators   建筑: architecture

[评分标准]   句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Dear Tom,

In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our National Stadium — the Bird’s Nest. Now I’d like to introduce it to you.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope that my introduction will satisfy you.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

你的澳大利亚笔友Tom发来电子邮件，向你询问国家体育馆“鸟巢”的有关信息。请你根据下列提示给Tom回一封电子邮件，简单介绍“鸟巢”。

写作内容

写作要求

1．字数：100左右

2．短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入句子总数；

3．参考词汇：田径：track and field events 观众：spectators  建筑：architecture

Dear Tom,

In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our National Stadium — the Bird’s Nest． Now I’d like to introduce it to you．……

I hope that my introduction will satisfy you．

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

你的澳大利亚笔友Tom发来电子邮件，向你询问国家体育馆“鸟巢”的有关信息。请你根据下列提示给Tom回一封电子邮件，简单介绍“鸟巢”。

注意：1.词数100左右; 2.短文的开头已为你写好; 3.短文须包括表中所提供的要点。

提示词语：  田径: track and field events    观众: spectators   建筑: architecture

Dear Tom,

In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our National Stadium ― the Bird’s

Nest. Now I’d like to introduce it to you.

_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

你的澳大利亚笔友Tom发来电子邮件，向你询问国家体育馆“鸟巢”的有关信息。请你根据下列提示给Tom回一封电子邮件，简单介绍“鸟巢”

注意：    1. 词数100-120字左右。

2. 短文的开头已为你写好，不计入字数。

3. 短文须包括表中所提供的要点，但可适当增减细节，以使行文连贯。

提示词语：田径track and field events    观众：spectators

Dear Tom,

In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our National Stadium-the Bird’s Nest, Now I’d like to introduce it to you._______________________________________________________

你的澳大利亚笔友Tom发来电子邮件，向你询问国家体育馆“鸟巢”的有关信息。请你根据下列提示给Tom回一封电子邮件，简单介绍“鸟巢”。

注意：1.词数100左右; 2.短文的开头已为你写好; 3.短文须包括表中所提供的要点。

提示词语：  田径: track and field events    观众: spectators   建筑: architecture

Dear Tom,

In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our National Stadium — the Bird’s

Nest. Now I’d like to introduce it to you.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

第二节　书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，在温哥华冬奥会上夺得两枚金牌的周洋曾经是你的同学。你的美国笔友Jock 对周洋很崇拜，来信希望更多了解到她的情况。请根据以下有关周洋的信息，给Jock写一封回信。
1.父母身体不好，家境贫困；
2.八岁开始滑冰，有运动天赋；
3.训练刻苦，比赛成绩优异。
注意：
　　1.词数100至120（信的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可以适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
I’m happy to receive your letter. Now I’d like to introduce some information of Zhou Yang to you.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，在温哥华冬奥会上夺得两枚金牌的周洋曾经是你的同学。你的美国笔友Jock 对周洋很崇拜，来信希望更多了解到她的情况。请根据以下有关周洋的信息，给Jock写一封回信。

1.父母身体不好，家境贫困；

2.八岁开始滑冰，有运动天赋；

3.训练刻苦，比赛成绩优异。

注意：

　　1.词数100至120（信的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.可以适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

I’m happy to receive your letter. Now I’d like to introduce some information of Zhou Yang to you.

第二节　书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，在温哥华冬奥会上夺得两枚金牌的周洋曾经是你的同学。你的美国笔友Jock 对周洋很崇拜，来信希望更多了解到她的情况。请根据以下有关周洋的信息，给Jock写一封回信。

1.父母身体不好，家境贫困；

2.八岁开始滑冰，有运动天赋；

3.训练刻苦，比赛成绩优异。

注意：

　　1.词数100至120（信的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.可以适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

I’m happy to receive your letter. Now I’d like to introduce some information of Zhou Yang to you.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Boys and girls, welcome to Elite Secondary School! I’m Mr. Green, in charge of this school. I’d like to introduce you to various aspect of our school, from our history to our buildings and activities. Elite Secondary School set up in 1960. In the past fifty years, Elite had experienced a lot of changes and developments. Our school finally decided to move to Aberdeen in 1990, due to the lack of the space. The school campus now was almost three times larger than the previous one. We even have three libraries which are available with all the teachers and students. As for laboratories, they have two Physics labs, two Chemistry labs, and a Biology lab which was established last year. Students here always have an enjoyable time at school because there is a widely range of extra-curricular activities for them to choose. We try to provide as much activities for our students as possible. Elite Secondary School is committed to providing the highest level of education to the children. Thank you for your time.