注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

       2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

Dear Editor,
    I’m a middle school student naming Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something. Recently I’ve noticed many of my classmates often to go to the net bar near our school. The other day I went here, too. I was surprised to see many students playing computer games, seeing films or chatted. Some students were even talking about love affairs online. On my opinion, net bars should be a place where we can find much useful informations. But the Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use with it. Otherwise, it will do us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make sure that students use net bars positively.

文中共有10处语言错误，

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

              2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’m a middle school student name Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something.

Recently I have noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber café near our

school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing

computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even talking about love

affairs online. On my opinion, the cyber cafe should be a place which we can find

much useful informations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather

than place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of them. Otherwise, it will give us great harm. So the local government should take measures to make sure that

students use cyber cafes positively.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你脾你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I'm a middle school student name Li Ming．I'm writing to tell you something． Recently I have noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school．I went there too in the other day．I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat．Some students are even talking about love affairs online．On my opinion, the cyber cafe should be a place which we can find much useful informations．The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games．The Internet is good if we make good use of them．Otherwise, it will do us great harm．So the local government should take measures to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively．