下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Wearing a pair of worn-out shoe, he wandered in the street. Though hungry, he could not find a penny in his pockets. Unfortunate, he became homeless, everyone in her family had cut off connection with him. Mild songs from the nearest house remind him of his every particular in acting. Up from now,he has star in more than 80 films, that have entertained many people. He was considered to be a outstanding actor. It was convicing that he would picked out to challenge the Oscar this year. But in now everything has changed.

此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉；在该行右边横线写下该词，并也用斜线划掉；

morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because      1.________

the water supply had cut off. The water had come back in the          2.________

evening. I did maths then. I didn’t stop after 12 o’clock. After a        3.________

short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English class.    4.________

After a long and tired class for more than two hours, I went            5.________

at home. Some work had been done but some hadn’t. I must          6.________

review all my subject such as the Sciences, the Humanities,           7. ________

which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as              8.________

Well. That’s terribly! Especially when there was no water.            9.________

文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：    1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Wearing a pair of worn-out shoe, he wandered in the street. Though hungry, he could not find a penny in his pockets. Unfortunate, he became homeless, everyone in her family had cut off connection with him. Mild songs from the nearest house remind him of his every particular in acting. Up from now, he has star in more than 80 films, that have entertained many people. He was considered to be a out-standing actor. It was convincing that he would picked out to challenge the Oscar this year. But in now everything has changed.

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。  
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。   
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。   
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。   
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；   
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。   
Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when you have a real need. That won't be easy, but we have to start anywhere. What's more, we can go to work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy smaller cars that burn more oil. Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, how many times have you walked out of a room, leaving the lights when no one’s there?

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）。如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

         此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

         此行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

  Working in a international company in New York, Bill used          1.       

to go to the barber's during working hours to have his hair                   2.       

cut, which, of course, ∧against the rule: Office workers had to           3.       

have their hair cut in their own times．While Bill was at                     4.       

the barber's one day, the manager came in by the accident to                 5.       

have his own hair cut．Bill tried to hide his face immediate                 6.       

he saw the manager, but the manager recognized himself．When      7.       

asking why he was having his hair cut in office time,                          8.       

Bill said calmly, “It grows in office time.” “No all of it,”                    9.       

said the manager．“Some of it grow in your own time.”                     10.       

“But I am not having it all cut off.” Bill replied.