写作（共两节，满分 35 分）

 请你对下文内容进行修改。文章中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice so put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reading it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求你对一段文章改错。先对每一行作出判断是对还是错。如果是对的，则在该行右边的横线上画一个勾（√）；如果有错误（每行不会多于一个错误），则按情况改错如下：
如此行多一个词，则把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线把该词划掉；
如此行缺一个词，则在该词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；
如此行错一个词，则在错的词下划一横线，并在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没错的不要改。
Dear Tom,
I am very exciting to hear that you are coming to                                          76.           
our school soon. Now let me to introduce our school                                      77.           
to you. Our school is a famous school with long history                                 78.           
We have many experienced teacher and excellent equipment.                          79.           
There were two teaching buildings. One is for seniors and the                         80.           
other is for juniors. There have two lab buildings and                                     81.           
a library. Except Chinese, maths, English, physics and                                   82.           
chemistry, we have some electives(选修课). The                                         83.           
students can choose that they like to attend. We   84.           
love our school. I am looking forward to meet you soon.           85.           
Yours,
Li hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,（   ）并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

　　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

     I often dream of become a teacher. I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boy and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well. What’s more, you have to be friends with your students and take good care of him. Only in this way can you be a good teacher and win respect from them. Though I am student now, I still work hard to make my dream to come true. 

文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties．The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese．My teacher advised me to keep diaries．I followed her advices．Happily it worked．Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher．She liked it very much that she read it to the class．Everyone said the story was the good one, I was great encouraged by their words．

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除
或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
　Dear Bob,
　　 Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself.My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of the  China. I go to Hongqi Middle School.  We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese,English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.Do you play any ball games?  What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua