Dear Sally,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job this

summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.

The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this

holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.

I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support

for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never

waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I've learnt how

to get along well with others. What's worse, I've gained some working

and social experience and I have learnt something can' t be learnt from

textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In the word, I had the

wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

                                                                                                        Yours,  

                                                                                                           Li Bing

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sally,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job this

summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency．

The work was interesting but tired．I think it was helpful to work this

holiday．It was the first time that I have earned money on my own．

I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support

for the family．I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never

waste money and learn to share worry with my parent．I've learnt how

to get along well with others．What's worse, I've gained some working

and social experience and I have learnt something can' t be learnt from

textbooks．All these will be good for my future．In the word, I had the

wonderful and valuable summer vacation．

                                                              Yours,  

                                                                                                               Li Bing

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该

行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

    此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

    此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

    注意：原行没有错的不要改

Dear Sally,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job in this     ___________

summer vacation, in which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.        __________

The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this       ___________

holiday. This was the first time that I have earned money on my own.       ___________

I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for    _________

the family . I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never      __________

waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I’ve learnt how ___________

to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working _________

and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from     ___________

textbooks. All this will be good for my future. In the word, I had a __________

wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该

行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

    此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

    此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

    注意：原行没有错的不要改

Dear Sally,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job in this                1.___________

summer vacation, in which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.         2.__________

The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this       3.___________

holiday. This was the first time that I have earned money on my own.      4.___________

I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for          5._________

the family . I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never       6.__________

waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I’ve learnt how 7. ___________

to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working 8._________

and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from      9.___________

textbooks. All this will be good for my future. In the word, I had a            10.__________

wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear Sally,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part – time job this    1．       

summer vacation, in which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.     2．     

The work was interesting but tired, I think it was helpful to work this   3．     

holiday. This was the first time that I have earned money on my own. 4．     

I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for      5．     

the family . I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never   6．     

waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I’ve learnt how    7．     

to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working 8．     

and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from 9．     

textbooks. All this will be good for my future. In the word, I had a       10．     

wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

Yous,

Li Bing

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

    注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

    　　　2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sally，

Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation，

of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency．The work was interesting but

tired．I think it was helpful to work this holiday．It was the first time that I have

earned money on my own．I've come to understand how hard my parents work to

support for the family．I used to keep on ask them for money，but now I'll never

waste money and learn to share worry with my parent．I've learnt how to get along

well with others．What’s worse，I've gained some working and social experience

and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks．All these will be good

for my future．In the word，I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation．

第二节 短文改错（共10小题，每题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(\)划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Sally,
Now I' d like to tell you something about my part-time job this   76.________
summer vacation, in which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.   77.________
The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this 78.________
holiday. That was the first time that I have earned money on my own. 79.________
I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for     80.________
the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I' 11 never   81.________
waste money and learn to share worries with my parent. I've learnt how  82.________
to get along well with others. What' s worse, I' ve gained some working  83.________
and social experience and I have learnt something can't be learnt from  84.________
textbooks. All this will be good for my future. In the word, I had a    85.________
wonderful and valuable summer vacation.