My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.

He did not want share things with other people. For            76. _______    

example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them          77. _______    

in a secret place where I couldn't find. Then he               78. _______    

ate it all, by himself. He never helped other.                 79. _______    

He said he is busy. That is, a game of                         80. _______    

tennis making him very busy. He did not care                   81. _______    

if something he did made people angry. For                     82. _______    

instance, on one night he played strong and                    83. _______    

loudly music till four o'clock in the morning. But             84. _______    

he is difference now. He often helps grandma with              85. _______    

housework, helps mom with cooking and helps

his classmates with their lessons.

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find . Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy . That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did made people angry. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock on the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps his classmates with their lessons.

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find . Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy . That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did made people angry. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock on the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps his classmates with their lessons.

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.

He did not want share things with other people. For               1.             

example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them            2.             

in a secret place where I couldn' t find. Then he                  3.             

ate it all, by himself. He never helped other.                       4.             

He said he is busy. That is, a game of                         5.             

tennis making him very busy. He did not care                    6.             

if something he did made people angry. For                     7.             

instance, on one night he played strong and                     8.             

loudly music till four o'clock in the morning. But               9.              

he is difference now. He often helps grandma with             10.             

housework, helps mom with cooking and helps

his classmates with their lessons.

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My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something what he did made people anger. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.

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My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something what he did made people anger. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.

短文改错（共10 小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was little boy. He did not want share things with
other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place,
that I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy.
In other words, a game of tennis made him very busy. He did not care if something that he did
it made people angry. For instance, one night he played strongly and loud music till four o’clock
in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with houseworks, helps mom
with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.

短文改错（共10 小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was little boy. He did not want share things with

other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place,

that I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy.

In other words, a game of tennis made him very busy. He did not care if something that he did

it made people angry. For instance, one night he played strongly and loud music till four o’clock

in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with houseworks, helps mom

with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.

文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was little boy. He did not

want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a

chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place, that I couldn’t find. Then he ate

it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. In other words, a

game of tennis made him very busy. He did not care if something that he did

it made people angry. For instance, one night he played strongly and loud

music till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often

helps grandma with houseworks, helps mom with cooking and helps his

classmates with their lessons.