Question

18．英语报将在全市举办以Giving is receiving 为主题的征文大赛．请你写一篇征文谈谈当今中学生如何帮助别人，要点如下：
在学校：帮助老师，关心同学等等
在家里：
在社区或其他场所：
帮助别人，快乐自己．
注意：（1）词数80-100；
（2）请结合实际增加细节，适当发挥，不能出现真实的校名和姓名；
（3）开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
There is an old saying-Giving is Receiving．It reminds us of that we should try to help others．As a student，
                                             
So，please be ready to help with each other and our life will be better and better．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：I think that I did a very meaningful thing我认为我做了一件很有意义的事．that引导的宾语从句．
句型二：I'm sure that you won't to lose我相信你不会输．表语从句．

解答 Giving is recieving
In many people's eyes，giving is never a good thing．But giving can also be recieving．（表明自己的观点）
    For example，when I was young．I helped with the housework in my home．I spent energy，and I wasted my happy time．But now，I think that I did a very meaningful thing．【高分句型一】Because I recieve some very precious experiences．I learned to do housework well，I learned to help my parents．（具体做什么，用实际行动来证明）
    Try to give something to others．I'm sure that you won't to lose..【高分句型二】
"Giving is recieving．"I'm sure that this sentence will help me in the future．

点评 在写作时需要明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，所以平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．