Question

2．仔细观察图片，并按要求作文．

写作要求：
1．结合自己的实际，描述画面所反映的现状．
2．简述这一现状带来的后果．
3．针对这一现状，表达自己的观点或愿望．
4．词数大约60-90词（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）．
5．文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实校名和姓名等信息．
词语提示：stress（压力）    short-sighted（近视的）  improving classes（提高班）
eyesight（视力）  poor（弱的）     do sports（做运动）    relax（放松）
Nowadays，we students have heavy burden （负担） of studies．At school，we begin our classes fromabout 7：30 in the morning and finish too many classes till 6：00 in the eveningevery day．Besides，after class we have to spend a great deal of time doing ourhomework and going over our lessons．What's worse，we still take all kinds ofimproving classes at the weekend，which makes us very tired both in physicalityand in mind．
As a result，wehave no time to do sports，take part in activities or even make friends．Because of much heavier schoolwork and less rest and sleep，our health isbecoming poorer and poorer．Meanwhile，most of us are short-sighted．
In my opinion，it'stime to say goodbye to our thick glasses．Five days devoted to school areenough for us．The world is colorful and there is a lot of fun in it．We needour own time to do what we like．If so，we will have a wonderful life．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是描述画面所反映的现状，简述这一现状带来的后果，表达自己的观点或愿望．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．描述图画，描述现状：学习压力大，课程多
2．带来的后果；
3．表达自己的观点或愿望
常用到的重点短语：
spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事
what's worse 更糟糕的是
because of 由于
take part in 参加
比较级+and+比较级 越来越…

【高分句型】
1．①What's worse，we still take all kinds of improving classes at the weekend，②which③makes us very tired both in physicalityand in mind．
①what's worse 更糟糕的是
②which引导的非限制性定语从句．修饰前面的整个句子．
③make sb+adj 让某人怎样
2．①Because of much heavier schoolwork and less rest and sleep，our health is becoming②poorer and poorer．
①because of 由于 后接名词、代词或动名词
②比较级+and+比较级 越来越…

3．We need our own time①to do ②what we like．
①动词不定式做目的状语．
②what引导的宾语从句，作为do的宾语．

解答 Nowadays，we students have heavy burden of studies．At school，we begin our classes from about 7：30 in the morning and finish too many classes till 6：00 in the evening every day．Besides，after class we have to spend a great deal of time doing our homework and going over our lessons．What's worse，we still take all kinds of improving classes at the weekend，which makes us very tired both in physicality and in mind．【高分句型】（描述图画，描述现状）
As a result，we have no time to do sports，take part in activities or even make friends．Because of much heavier schoolwork and less rest and sleep，our health is becoming poorer and poorer．【高分句型】Meanwhile，most of us are short-sighted．（带来的后果）
In my opinion，it's time to say goodbye to our thick glasses．Five days devoted to school are enough for us．The world is colorful and there is a lot of fun in it．We need our own time to do what we like．【高分句型】If so，we will have a wonderful life．（表达自己的观点或愿望）

点评 1．看图作文通常有一定得提示，所以在动笔前一定要通读提示，弄懂写作要求，如时间、地点、人物、事件发生地的先后顺序等． 
2．图画是作文的依据，要仔细观察分析图画的画面，弄清画面所反映的真实内涵或蕴含的某种哲理． 
3．找出图中事物之间的内在联系．如果多幅图画，就要分析画与画之间的内在联系及画中人物、事物之间的逻辑联系．要根据画面情景展开联想． 
4．反复阅读所给的关键词，并以此为线索从中悟出试题设计者要阐述的中心思想．