Question

14．我国每年"舌尖上的浪费"能养活2亿人．这个数字触动了所有国人的心．杜绝浪费．吃光盘中食物的"光盘行动"得到了大众的积极响应．请根据以下图片提示，结合自己的观点和想法，以Save Food为题写一篇文章．
要求：
1.80词左右，可适当发挥．
2．文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数． 
3.1eftavers剩饭剩菜

Save Food
The annual waste food in China is almost much enough to feed about 200million people a year．The government has called on us to save food so that we can enjoy a happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．
First，To save food，we shouldn't waste any of our food．We should eat up all the food．We shouldn't order the food more than we can eat while dining out，because many people in the world don't have enough food to eat．Second，we may order less or smaller dishes in the restraurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later．In a word，I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．
I hope we can start now．Save food，save our lives．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是根据以下图片提示，结合自己的观点和想法，以Save Food为题写一篇文章．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．描述图画；图片中有一些人在浪费食物，并给出一些节约粮食的建议
2．我的观点和想法；
 
常用到的重点短语：
eat up 吃光
in a word 总之
more than 多于
dining out外出吃饭
【高分句型】
1．First，to save food，we shouldn't waste any of our food．
动词不定式做目的状语．
2．We shouldn't order the food①more than we can eat②while dining out，③because many people in the world don't have enough food ④to eat．
①more than 多于
②while dining out是while we dine out 的缩写
③because引导的原因状语从句．
④动词不定式作为后置定语，修饰前面的enough food．

3．①In a word，I think ②③it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．
①In a word总之
②think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
③it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语

解答 The annual waste food in China is almost much enough to feed about 200 million people a year．The government has called on us to save food so that we can enjoy a happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．
First，to save food，we shouldn't waste any of our food．【高分句型】We should eat up all the food．We shouldn't order the food more than we can eat while dining out，because many people in the world don't have enough food to eat．【高分句型】Second，we may order less or smaller dishes in the restraurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later．（描述图画）In a word，I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．【高分句型】（我的观点和想法）

I hope we can star now．Save food，save our lives．

点评 图画是作文的依据，要仔细观察分析图画的画面，弄清画面所反映的真实内涵或蕴含的某种哲理．
运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思．然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来．
串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然．