Question

9．图示作文：下列图片描述的是上周日下午，刘强和赵磊所经历的一件事．请根据这些图片写一篇作文．

要求：
1．话题作文或圈示作文任选其一．
2．要求字迹工整，语法正确．意思连贯，合乎逻辑．可适当发挥．
3．词数在80-100词之间．
Liu Qiang and Zhao Lei are good friends．They both like playing soccer very much．Last Sunday，they decided to play soccer to relax in their neighborhood in the afternoon．They were both good at soccer and they played happily．Suddenly，Liu Qiang kicked the ball so hard that it flew to the window of Granny Ma's house and made the window broken．The pieces of the window fell onto the ground everywhere．Liu Qiang and Zhao lei felt very sorry．So they went to granny Ma's house and said sorry to her．
Although they did something wrong，they were still good boys，because they were honest．Everyone should try to be an honest person．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是根据图片讲述上周日下午刘强和赵磊所经历的一件事．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．描述图画；踢足球，打碎了玻璃，和奶奶道歉
2．我的感想；
 
常用到的重点短语：
decide to do sth 决定做某事
be good at 擅长
make+sth+adj 让某某怎样
try to do sth 尽力做某事
【高分句型】
1．Suddenly，Liu Qiang kicked the ball①so hard that it flew to the window of Granny Ma's house and②made the window broken．
①so…that，表示如此…以至于…，that引导的结果状语从句．
②make+sth+adj 让某某怎样
2．①Although they did ②something wrong，they were still good boys，③because they were honest．
①although引导的让步状语从句，不能和but连用．
②形容词修饰不定代词，需后置．
③because引导的原因状语从句．
3．Everyone should try to be an honest person．
try to do sth 尽力做某事

解答 Liu Qiang and Zhao Lei are good friends．They both like playing soccer very much．Last Sunday，they decided to play soccer to relax in their neighborhood in the afternoon．They were both good at soccer and they played happily．Suddenly，Liu Qiang kicked the ball so hard that it flew to the window of Granny Ma's house and made the window broken．【高分句型】The pieces of the window fell onto the ground everywhere．Liu Qiang and Zhao lei felt very sorry．So they went to granny Ma's house and said sorry to her．（描述图画）       Although they did something wrong，they were still good boys，because they were honest．【高分句型】Everyone should try to be an honest person．【高分句型】（我的感想）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，本题材料是四幅图画．动笔前应认真看图，了解图画内容，展开合理想象．然后根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题．此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题．写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误．只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数．另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依．