Question

【题目】 书面表达 （满分10分）

假设您的名字是李华,给你新认识的朋友Jim 发个E-mail ,介绍您自己的基本情况（年龄，学习的班级，爱好，家庭情况等可适当发挥）

要求：1 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。

2 词数不少于60词。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jim,

I would like to tell you something about myself. I am a student. I am thirteen years old. I am in Class One,Grade One in No. 2 Middle School in Guigang. I like English very much. I think you can help me with my English. There are four people in my family. My father is an office worker and my mother is a Chinese teacher. My sister is a student, too. She is in Grade Two. I have a happy family. Let's be good friends and help each

other.

Please write soon.

All the best!

Yours,

Lihua

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如I would like to tell you something about myself.等，I think等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。