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目前在学生的日常学习中，抄袭作业是一种普遍现象。上周第十八中学初二(五)就此现象召开主题班会。班会课上，老师和学生就作业布置的目的、抄袭作业的原因以及可能带来的危害进行了热烈的讨论。请根据表格提供的信息，以“My opinion on copying others' Homework”为题谈谈自己对这一问题的认识和看法，可做适当的展开，开头已给出。(词数不少于80)

抄袭作业的原因	1，作业布置过多．学生做不完 2．部分作业太难，学生做不来 3．部分学生不愿思考或懒惰，更愿意将时间花在玩上 4. ………
作业布置的目的	1．让学生更好的了解所学的知识 2．让老师知晓哪些知识点学生没有掌握，帮助老师提 高教学水平。 3． ………
个人对抄袭作业的看 法	1．抄袭不对．违反校规。会让学生对功课更不感兴趣 2．要诚实，勤奋学习，有困难可请教老师和同学。 3．……

Last week, our class had a warm discussion on copying other's homework. Nowadays, copying others' homework is very common at school. Why do so many students like to copy homework? I think ______________________________________________________________________________________

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【答案】

Last week, our class had a warm discussion on copying others’ homework. Nowadays, copying others’ homework is very common at school. Why do so many students like to copy homework? I think there are many reasons for it.Some students think they have too much homework and they can’t finish it all.Some think it is too difficult for them.And others are lazy or don’t want to think a lot and they prefer to spend time playing.

In fact,homework is left for students to make what they learn clearer and better.And also it’s important for teachers to know whether their students learn a lot in class.Teachers may also try out new ideas to improve their teaching.

In my opinion, it’s not right to copy others’ homework and it breaks school rules.As students, we must be honest and try our best to work hard.The more they copy others’ homework,the less interest they will have in what they are learning.I think we could ask teachers or other students for help when we have problems.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据表格所给信息，来谈谈自己对抄袭作业这一问题的认识和看法。题目中有关于这一问题的具体信息，我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。这些信息包括了抄袭作业的原因、老师布置作业的目的和个人对抄袭作业的看法，写作时，我们需要将这些信息完整地表达出来，使文章的意思衔接更自然。其中涉及到的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，详细地整合了所给信息，结构清晰，要点全面。而且作者在写作时，条理清晰，段落分明，过渡自然，这一点很好。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。如homework is left for students to make what they learn clearer and better.其中用到了宾语从句；The more they copy others’ homework,the less interest they will have in what they are learning其中用到了the+比较级，the+比较级的用法，还涉及到了宾语从句；it’s not right to copy others’ homework and it breaks school rules其中用到了it做形式主语，不定式做真正主语的结构。