Hi!Liu Jing, My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he ahs heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself.He says the bus service in Beijing is very good now,and people can to anywhere by bus.Is he right?Can you tell me something more about it? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Tony |
Hi!Tony, I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing.Your grandpa is right.The bus service in Beijing is really good now.There are bus lines all over Beijing and buses can even take you to a small village.Besides,special seats are offered on buses.People do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap. I like taking a bus because I think it's comfortable and also good for the environment.So it's a good choice for your grandpa to travel in Beijing. If you have more questions,please ask me. If you have more questions,please ask me. Yours, Liu Jing |
分析 这是一篇提纲作文.内容是给托尼写一封回信,回答他的问题,介绍北京良好的公交服务,并谈谈你的感受.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第三人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.回答Tony的问题
2.介绍北京良好的公交服务
3.谈谈你的感受
常用到的重点短语:
there be 有
besides 另外
spend 时间 doing sth花时间做某事
be good for对…有益
offer提供
高分句型:
1.①Besides,special seats②are offered on buses.
①besides另外,引出下文.
②被动语态的运用,意在突出主语.
2.So it's a good choice for your grandpa to travel in Beijing
it作为形式主语,后面的to travel in Beijing动词不定式做真正主语.
解答 Dear Tony,
I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing.
Your grandpa is right.The bus service in Beijing is really good now.(回答Tony的问题)There are bus lines all over Beijing and buses can even take you to a small village.Besides,special seats are offered on buses(高分句型).People do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap.(介绍北京良好的公交服务)
I like taking a bus because I think it's comfortable and also good for the environment.So it's a good choice for your grandpa to travel in Beijing.(我的感受)(高分句型)
If you have more questions,please ask me.
Yours,
Liu Jing
点评 本文是一篇给材料作文,短文的开头已经给出.写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料,确定写作内容,注意将这些要点全部表达出来,并且要有适当的发挥,在谈到自己的观点时,要结合活动内容,写出自己的观点.
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