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13．为了使同学们之间相处得更加融洽，并且能够更好地适应社会，你校学生会正在举办以"how to behave well"为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法．
要点：1）守时、有礼貌、诚实、公正；
2）友好待人，乐于助人；
3）…
要求：1）用上所给要点，并适当补充．
2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地址等相关信息．
3）80个单词左右．
How to behave well
What should we teenagers do to get on well with everything and everyone else？Here is what we should do and shouldn't be allowed to do．
As a good student，we must be on time and honest．And we should be polite and fair to everyone．Also，we should be kind and friendly to others．We should be ready to help people in trouble．Then we can get the same help from others．Besides these，we should obey traffic rules to keep safe．But we shouldn't make noise in public．We shouldn't drop litter everywhere，either．
It is not easy to behave well in daily life．However，everything will be OK if we try our best．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"how to behave well"为题谈谈对同学之间的日常行为举止的看法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1）守时、有礼貌、诚实、公正；
2）友好待人，乐于助人；
3）其他
常用到的重点短语：
on time 准时 守时
be kind to sb 对某人友好
be ready to do sth 准备做某事
obey rules 遵守规则
make noise 制造噪音
【高分句型】
1．We should①be ready to help people ②in trouble．
①be ready to do sth 准备做某事
②介词短语做后置定语，修饰前面的people．
2．①However，everything will be OK ②if we③try our best．
①however表转折，然而．
②if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．
③try one's best 竭尽全力

解答 How to behave well
What should we teenagers do to get on well with everything and everyone else？Here is what we should do and shouldn't be allowed to do．
As a good student，we must be on time and honest．And we should be polite and fair to everyone．（守时、有礼貌、诚实、公正）Also，we should be kind and friendly to others．We should be ready to help people in trouble．【高分句型】Then we can get the same help from others．（友好待人，乐于助人）Besides these，we should obey traffic rules to keep safe．But we shouldn't make noise in public．We shouldn't drop litter everywhere，either．（遵守交通规则，不要制造噪音、随地扔垃圾）
It is not easy to behave well in daily life．However，everything will be OK if we try our best．【高分句型】

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．