Question

8．在一节写作课上，老师要求你们写一篇名为"心目中的同学"的短文，现在请你用英文来介绍一下你的同学Mike．
1）Mike学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子；
2）他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大；
3）他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖；
4）现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷；
5）他的梦想…我认为…
注意事项：
1）短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2）第5要点的内容必须用2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3）词数90个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：
有创意的  creative    爱迪生  Edison
My classmate Mike is hard-working．He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas．In his childhood，he read many books about scientists．The story of Edison influenced him most．He is crazy about inventing things．So far，he has won several awards for inventions．Now he is busy with his study，but he has never given up his hobby．He says it's great fun for him．His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison．I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是介绍一下你的同学Mike．时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1）Mike学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子；
2）他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大；
3）他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖；
4）现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷；
5）他的梦想…我认为…
常用到的重点短语：
come up with 想出…
be crazy about 对…着迷
give up 放弃
be known for 因…而著名
【高分句型】
1．His dream is ①to be an inventor②as great as Edison．
①动词不定式做表语，和be动词is构成系表结构．
②as…as与…一样．
2．I think①he will ②be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day
①后接省略了that的宾语从句．
②be known for 因…而著名

解答 My classmate Michael is hard-working．He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas．（Mike学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子）In his childhood，he read many books about scientists．The story of Edison influenced him most．（他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大）He is crazy about inventing things．So far，he has won several awards for inventions．（他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖）Now he is busy with his study，but he has never given up his hobby．He says it's great fun for him．（现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷）His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison．【高分句型】（他的梦想是成为像爱迪生一样的发明家）I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day．【高分句型】（我认为他会实现梦想）

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯