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17．随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过"低碳生活（low-carbon life）"，即减少二氧化碳的排放，低能量﹑低消耗﹑低开支的生活．请写一篇英文倡议书，倡议你的同学们加入"低碳一族"，为环保做出贡献．提示要点如下：
1．用手洗衣服；
2．多走楼梯，少用电梯；
3．去超市自备购物袋；
4．步行或者骑自行车上学；
5．…
注意：1．词数：120-150左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
With the global warming getting worse，more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases．As students，we have the responsibility to change our lifestyle to fit the world better．The following are some small things that may lead to big improvement of the environment．
Firstly，wash your clothes by hand instead of using washing machines．Secondly，don't take elevators unless it is necessary，using stairs does good to both your health and the environment．Thirdly，remember to bring your own shopping bags when you go to the supermarket．Lastly，go to school on foot or by bicycle．Buses produce carbon，too．
Let's take action and be low-carbon people!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是写一篇英文倡议书，倡议你的同学们加入"低碳一族"，为环保做出贡献．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一，二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．用手洗衣服；
2．多走楼梯，少用电梯；
3．去超市自备购物袋；
4．步行或者骑自行车上学；
5，其他
常用到的重点短语：
instead of 而不是
do good to 对…有益
remember to do sth 记得去做某事
take action 采取行动
【高分句型】
1．The following are some small things that may lead to big improvement of the environment．
that作为关系词的定语从句，修饰先行词things，that作为从句的主语．
2．Secondly，don't take elevators①unless it is necessary，②using stairs③does good to④both your health and the environment．
①unless引导的条件状语从句，主句是祈使句，从句用一般现在时．
②动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数does．
③do good to 对…有益
④both…and…两者都
3．Thirdly，①remember to bring your own shopping bags ②when you go to the supermarket．
①remember to do sth 记得去做某事
②when引导的时间状语从句．

解答 With the global warming getting worse，more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases．As students，we have the responsibility to change our lifestyle to fit the world better．The following are some small things that may lead to big improvement of the environment．【高分句型】
Firstly，wash your clothes by hand instead of using washing machines．（用手洗衣服）Secondly，don't take elevators unless it is necessary，using stairs does good to both your health and the environment．【高分句型】（多走楼梯，少用电梯）Thirdly，remember to bring your own shopping bags when you go to the supermarket．【高分句型】（去超市自备购物袋）Lastly，go to school on foot or by bicycle．Buses produce carbon，too．（步行或者骑自行车上学）
Let's take action and be low-carbon people!（号召）

点评 这是一篇倡议书，内容具有时代性，生活性和可写性．要求学生根据现在的情况，倡议同学们加入低碳一族．作文要包含所有中文提示，可根据主题适当发挥．该文章审题容易，学生切入容易，但要取得高分，学生要适当运用高级词汇，句型和各种连接词