Question

10．良好的生活习惯对我们的成长非常重要．你认为良好的生活习惯应当是怎样的？请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥．
提示：1．吃得好，才能有健康的身体．
2．必须吃早餐，给身体提供能量．
3．饮食要健康，多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品．
4．早睡早起身体好．
5．参加体育锻炼，强身健体．
I think good habits are important to us．As we know，we must have enough food to keep us healthy．Breakfast is necessary．It gives us energy in the morning．We must also have healthy food．Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food．Don't forget to wash your hands before meals．We should go to bed early and get up early．Staying up late at night is bad for our health．Of course，it's necessary for us to take exercise．Exercise will keep us active and strong．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈你认为的良好的生活习惯应当是怎样的．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一/三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．吃得好，才能有健康的身体．
2．必须吃早餐，给身体提供能量．
3．饮食要健康，多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品．
4．早睡早起身体好．
5．参加体育锻炼，强身健体．

常用到的重点短语：
keep healthy 保持健康
remember to do sth 记得去做某事
forget to do sth 忘了去做某事
stay up late 熬夜
be bad for 对…不利

【高分句型】
1．①Staying up late at night②is bad for our health．
①动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数is．
②be bad for 对…不利
2．①Of course，②it's necessary for us to take exercise．
①of course 当然．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

解答 I think good habits are important to us．As we know，we must have enough food to keep us healthy．（吃得好，才能有健康的身体）Breakfast is necessary．It gives us energy in the morning．（必须吃早餐，给身体提供能量）We must also have healthy food．Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food．Don't forget to wash your hands before meals．（饮食要健康，多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品）．We should go to bed early and get up early．Staying up late at night is bad for our health．【高分句型】（早睡早起身体好）Of course，it's necessary for us to take exercise．【高分句型】Exercise will keep us active and strong．（参加体育锻炼，强身健体）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．