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3．今年年初，无锡被评为2013年度内地最宜居城市．假设你班对此进行了一次班级讨论，请你在答题卡指定的位置上用英语写一篇80词左右的发言稿，阐述你的观点和感想．内容提示如下：
1．政府修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁；
2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩；
3．私家车越来越多，停车（park cars）已成了大问题；
4．城市变化有利有弊；
5．你的希望．
注意：
1．短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2．第5要点的内容须用2～3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3．发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots ofnew roads，bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of openparks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends andholidays．More and more people have their own cars and it's become difficult topark cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hopethe government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and morebeautiful in the future．．

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分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈你对无锡被评为2013年度内地最宜居城市的观点和感想．时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．政府修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁；
2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩；
3．私家车越来越多，停车（park cars）已成了大问题；
4．城市变化有利有弊；
5．你的希望．
常用到的重点短语：
a number of 大量的
have fun 玩的开心
both…and…两者都
deal with 处理
比较级+and+比较级  越来越…
【高分句型】
1．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．
to have a picnic and have fun 动词不定式做目的状语．
2．①More and more people have their own cars and②it's become difficult to park cars．
①比较级+and+比较级  越来越…
②it是形式主语，后面的动词不定式是真正主语．

解答 There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years． The government has built lots of new roads，bridges and even undergrounds．（政府修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁）There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．【高分句型】（新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩）More and more people have their own cars and it's become difficult to park cars．【高分句型】（私家车越来越多，停车已成了大问题）The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．（城市变化有利有弊；）I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future．（我的希望）

点评 本文是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头已经给出．写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，并且要有适当的发挥，在谈到自己的观点时，要结合活动内容，写出自己的观点．