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18．每个人都不可能没有烦恼．当你有烦恼时，请试着控制你的情绪，因为情绪可以影响你生活的很多方面．所以生活应当相信自己，笑对人生，多与父母，朋友沟通．
请展开你的丰富的联想，写一篇短文．
要求：句子通顺，表达清晰，词数在60-80之间．
提示词：feel happy，mirror，the best，help others in need，believe you，have a nice day，express，feelings，talk with 等
Nobody can be happy all the time．When you become unhappy，you can try to control your feelings．Because bad feelings can make you lose your friends and give you other bad effects．Here are some ways to make you feel better．
1）Look in the mirror and speak to yourself．"I'm the best in the world．I can do anything．"
2）Do something for others．You will be happy if you help others in need．
3）Smile when you get up in the morning and you will have a nice day．
4）Write down your thoughts，dreams or anything you want．Writing always helps you express your feelings．
5）Stay with your family．You may talk with your parents，relatives，friends and so on．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇要点文．写作时，要写全要点，可以利用所给的提示单词来确定要点；文章是要表达建议，用一般现在时态最好．重点短语和句型：control your feelings控制情绪make you lose your friends让你失去朋友speak to yourself自言自语When you become unhappy，you can try to control your feelings．
when连接时间状语从句．You will be happy if you help others in need．
if连接条件状语从句．Writing always helps you express your feelings．
动名词writing作主语；help sb do sth帮助某人做某事．

解答 Nobody can be happy all the time．When you become unhappy，you can try to control your feelings．（高分句型一）Because bad feelings can make you lose your friends and give you other bad effects．Here are some ways to make you feel better．【表达观点】
1）Look in the mirror and speak to yourself．"I'm the best in the world．I can do anything．"
2）Do something for others．You will be happy if you help others in need．（高分句型二）
3）Smile when you get up in the morning and you will have a nice day．
4）Write down your thoughts，dreams or anything you want．Writing always helps you express your feelings．（高分句型三）
5）Stay with your family．You may talk with your parents，relatives，friends and so on．【提出建议】

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．