Question

现在很多学生周末都在上课，家长认为很好,而学生们却有很多抱怨。请你以Should students have lessons at the weekend?为题，参照表内所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文。

Parents	Students	Your opinion(观点)
1.learn more and better 2. no time to play computer games	1. have no time to relax 2. have no time to do their homework	1…. 2…. ….

注意：1．所写内容必须包括表中各方观点。(可适当发挥)。
2．词数不少于70词，短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
Should students have lessons at the weekend?
Nowadays many teenagers have lessons at the weekend.

Answer 1

one possible vision:
Should students have lessons at the weekend 
Nowadays many teenagers have lessons at the weekends. Many parents think we can learn more and better with the help of our teachers at school. And we may feel happy to be with our classmates at school. What’s more, we won’t have time to play computer games. So they think it’s a good idea to have lessons at the weekend. Some students think if they have lessons at the weekends, they will have no time to do their homework. Of course, they have no time to relax themselves at all. In my opinion, we students should have a rest after studying for a week. We need some time to do what we like, such as playing basketball, swimming, running and so on. Also, at the weekend, we can spend more time on the lessons that we are not very good at. 

试题分析：本作文题目是话题作文。以周末是否应该上课为话题，展开讨论。题中给出了内容提示。大体分为三部分，父母的想法，学生的想法，和你的观点。父母和学生的想法已经给出，必须包含在作文中。自己的想法要独自发挥。文章的重心应该是your opinion。在完整表达所给内容之后，重点要有层次连贯地表达自己的观点。
【亮点说明】例文内容完整不罗嗦，层次分明不混乱。用自己的话，把所给的内容巧妙地连接起来，成为一体。并未呆板的按照作文提示一步一步进行。巧妙的表达了父母和学生的想法之后，明确地阐明了作者的个人观点。文章还用到了所学的重要短语句式。比如，it’s adj to do sth； of  course; in one’s opinion等等，提高了文章的层次。