Question

资源短缺威胁全球，节约资源刻不容缓。勤俭光荣，浪费可耻。假设你是李雷，请你给全班同学写一封倡议信，内容包括：
谈谈你曾经看到的校园内出现的资源浪费的现象，你当时的感受是什么？
针对校园出现的各种浪费现象，向同学们提出至少三条改进措施
号召大家节约资源，杜绝浪费。
注意：在书信中不能透露真实的姓名和学校，不能照抄原文。词数：80词左右。
参考词汇：resource(资源)  electricity(电) 
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Li Lei

Answer 1

Dear classmates,
Nowadays, some of our students have formed some bad habits on campus. They leave the lights on in the daytime or leave water running after washing. Some leave too much food on the table after eating in the canteen. Besides,waste paper and books can be seen everywhere. These bad habits will not only have bad influence on our character and behavior,but also waste the limited resources. If we keep on wasting things, there will not be anything left on the earth. So it is high time that we had to deal with the problems.Firstly, make sure that the lights and the electric fans are turned off when there is no one in the room.Secondly,don’t forget to turn off the tap after it is used. Thirdly, it will be good enough for us to use a basket instead of a plastic bag when go to the market. Fourthly, We can use both sides of every piece of paper, especially when we are making notes.
If we reduce the waste, we will change the present situation.
Yours,
Li Lei

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。作本文题材紧扣学生学习生活，学生有很大的发挥空间。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘话题内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时适当使用连接词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用的句式和短语，如：not only---but also、it is high time that从句、make sure that 从句、it will be good enough for us to use、in the daytime、have influence on、deal with、turn off、instead of以及连接词besides、firstly、secondly等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。