Question

【题目】Linda暑假过得很开心。假如你是Linda，请根据以下提示写一篇70词左右的短文讲述一下是如何度过暑假的。

要点提示：

1. 去海南旅游，沙滩上玩；

2. 做自己喜欢的事情，比如：逛书店买书；

3. 和朋友踢足球，进行体育锻炼；

4. 每天早上读英语，上午安排两个小时做作业。

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Answer 1

【答案】I enjoyed my summer vacation. I traveled to Hainan with my parents and we had fun on the beach. During the vacation I often went to my favorite bookstore and bought many interesting books. Sometimes I played soccer with my friends in the afternoon. Playing sport could keep us healthy. I also spent some time in studying. Every morning I read English, and from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. I did my homework.

【解析】本篇作文属于材料作文，主要表达如何度过暑假。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用了时态语态和主谓一致，特别是一些亮点词句，如enjoy, have fun, playing sports could keep us healthy, also等，增加了逻辑关系，增强了上下文的意思连贯性，用词准确，句子通顺。