Question

【题目】请以My best friend为题写一篇作文。要点如下，可适当发挥。

要点：1.Amy是我最好的朋友，也是我的邻居。

2.她很聪明，学习也很用功。对中国的历史很了解，也擅长于写作。

3.经常参加一些户外活动，像骑马、野营之类的。

4.很善良，经常帮助别人。

要求：1.内容完整，书写清晰，书写规范

2.60词左右

参考词汇：neighbor 邻居

My best friend

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Answer 1

【答案】I have a good friend. Her name is Amy. She lives next to my house.

She is good at her lessons. She’s very smart. She knows history well. I often learn from her. She does well in writings. She is also good at outdoor activities. She likes riding horses and going camping. She is kind. She is ready to help others. She is in a club called helping. She often gives her seat to others on buses. Last week she saw a poor boy. She helped him.

【解析】试题分析：本篇习作成功地完成了写作任务，表达顺畅，结构连贯，字数符合要求。准确运用时态，要点全面，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，适当发挥了想象。短语的使用使得文章很生动，例如next to，be good at，like doing sth.，be ready to等。而多种句式的运用则是本文的亮点，例如，I have a good friend.，She is good at her lessons.，She likes riding horses and going camping.，Last week she saw a poor boy.等。显然，这是一篇非常优秀的习作。