Question

【题目】共享单车(shared bikes)在厦门投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，它是国民素质的“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给《21世纪英文报》写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。

社会现状	自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势	1.随处可见，出行方便 2.有益健康，减少污染 3.费用不高，负担得起
存在问题	1.未及时归还 2.占道挡路
你的观点	我认为……(考生自拟，至少2点)

注意事项:1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2―3句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥。

3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

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Answer 1

【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.

Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.

But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.

I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们给《21世纪英文报》投稿，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容，包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达，而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，并表达出来，要求至少两点。通过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第三人称来叙述，短文可以分成两段或者三段，一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，改变文章句式节奏，使用不同的句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。用到的短语有reduce pollution 减少污染；What's more 此外，take up 占据，in our way挡我们的路，living a green life 过绿色生活。