分析 此作文要求写一篇提纲作文.题目为:learned to be/do after the failure.动笔前应把题目补充完整,先认真阅读材料,围绕所给材料组织内容,确定主要短语,句式等问题.可以包含这些要点:①考试后感觉怎么样;②以后怎么办.句子要通顺连贯,没有语法错误.
1.高分句型:I felt very surprised and sad when I was told that I had failed to pass an exam last Friday当我被告知上星期五我没有通过考试时,我感到非常惊讶和伤心.这是when引导的时间状语从句,从句中用的是被动语态 I was told.
2.高分句型:I have learned that I won't be successful unless I do my best我知道我不会成功,除非我尽我最大的努力,首先这是that引导的宾语从句,然后宾语从句中又有一个unless引导的条件状语从句.
解答 I learned to study harder after the failure
I felt very surprised and sad when I was told that I had failed to pass an exam last Friday【高分句型一,注意时间状语从句的使用】.It gave me a serious attack.【要点一】But after that I didn't give up.I studied much harder than before.I asked teachers for help as soon as I had any problem.Then I was successful in the next exam.As an old saying goes,"No pain,no gain."I have learned that I won't be successful unless I do my best【高分句型一,注意宾语从句,状语从句的使用】.【要点二】
点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,多阅读此类题材,将词汇归类整理;动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写出关键单词.写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but,so,then等.
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