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5．良好的习惯成就美好的未来．作为青少年，如何培养良好的习惯呢？请你以"How to Develop Good Habits"为题，根据以下的内容提示，写一篇英语短文．
提示：1．上课认真听讲，每天按时完成作业；2．闲暇时多读课外书籍； 3．多吃蔬菜、水果；
…（请补充两点）
要求：1．用上所给要点，并适当发挥，使短文条理清楚、语句连贯；
2．词数80左右，短文开头已给出，但不计入总词数；
3．文中不得提及考生自己的真实姓名．
How to Develop Good Habits
It's very important for us to develop good habits．                                               

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week对于我们来说一周锻炼三四次是必要的．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

【高分句型二】
What's more，get enough sleep，go to bed early and don't stay up late再者，足够的睡眠，早睡不要熬夜．
what's more 再者

解答 How to Develop Good Habits
It's very important for us to develop good habits．As teenagers，what should we do？In my opinion，we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary．It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day．（上课认真听讲，每天按时完成作业）In spare time，we had better read some books to get more knowledge（闲暇时多读课外书籍）．Also，we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food．（多吃蔬菜、水果；）It's necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week．【高分句型一】（多锻炼）What's more，get enough sleep，go to bed early and don't stay up late．【高分句型二】（充足的睡眠）Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean．Exercise is fun and relaxing．It's healthy for the mind and body．Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily．

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．