Question

13．你一定有过难忘的旅游经历，它给你留下了什么印象？请根据你自己的经历和所给的提示问题，以"A Pleasant Trip"为题写一篇短文．
提示：1．Where did you go？
2．How did you go there？
3．When did you go there？
4．How long did you stay there？
5．What did you do there？
6．What do you think of it？
要求：1．语句通顺，语法正确，涵盖所给提示并有适当发挥．
2．词数70左右．
A Pleasant Trip
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：、
①We went there by bus．我们乘公共汽车去那儿．句子中by+某种交通工具表示乘坐某种交通工具．
②After lunch，some boys played football on the grass，some girls flew kites，others sang and danced under a big tree．午饭后，一些男孩在草地上踢足球，一些女孩放风筝，另一些男孩在大树下唱歌跳舞．句子中play football 表示踢足球，中间不加冠词，on the grass表示在草地上；fly kites表示放风筝．

解答 A Pleasant Trip
I went to Huoshankou Park last Saturday with my classmates．We met at the school gate at eight o'clock．We went there by bus（高分句型）．（旅游的地方以及去的方式）
We got there at about nine o'clock．It was sunny that day．（到达的时间及天气状况）First，we climbed the mountain．And then we had a rest and had lunch．After lunch，some boys played football on the grass，some girls flew kites，others sang and danced under a big tree（高分句型）．（所做的事情）We are very happy．（感受）
 We went back at four in the afternoon．（介绍回来的时间）

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