Question

18．假如你是李明，你快初中毕业了，下星期六你们班级将举行班会，请你根据如下内容写一篇发言稿，谈谈自已的打算．内容应包括如下要点：
（1）学好英语，准备在2012年伦敦奥运会（London Olympic Games）期间当一名志愿者．
（2）为《21st Century》报写文章，报道有关中学生的故事，让外国朋友了解中国，喜欢中国．
（3）为希望工程做点事，让贫困儿童有机会上学．
（4）升入高中后，更努力学习，成为一名优秀学生．
注意：
1、文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名．
2、内容可适当发挥．
3、90词左右（开头不计入总词数）．
Hello，everyone!I'm very glad to tell you something about my plans in the next few years．I think it important for me to learn English well because I hope to be a volunteer for the 2012 London Olympic Games．I want to improve my English and abilities．I'll also write more stories about ourselves for 21^stCentury so that foreign friends will know more about China and care for China．Another plan is that I wanttodosomething for Project Hope．I'll call on people to donate their clothes，stationery and money to Project Hope．I'm going to help poor children have chances to go to school．As for my last plan，I'll work harder at my lessons when I'm at high school．I'll do my best to become a good student．
That's all．Thank you．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈你毕业后的计划和打算．时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
（1）学好英语，准备在2012年伦敦奥运会（London Olympic Games）期间当一名志愿者．
（2）为《21st Century》报写文章，报道有关中学生的故事，让外国朋友了解中国，喜欢中国．
（3）为希望工程做点事，让贫困儿童有机会上学．
（4）升入高中后，更努力学习，成为一名优秀学生．
常用到的重点短语：
want to do sth 想要做某事
call on 召集
be going to do 打算做某事
do one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
【高分句型】
1．I think①it important for me to learn English well②because I hope to be a volunteer for the 2012 London Olympic Games．
①it是形式宾语，动词不定式是真正宾语．
②because引导的原因状语从句．
2．I'll also write more stories about ourselves for 21^st Century so that foreign friends will know more about China and care for China．
so that引导的目的状语从句

解答 Hello，everyone!I'm very glad to tell you something about my plans in the next few years．
I think it important for me to learn English well because I hope to be a volunteer for the 2012 London Olympic Games．【高分句型】（当一名志愿者．）I want to improve my English and abilities．I'll also write more stories about ourselves for 21^st Century so that foreign friends will know more about China and care for China．【高分句型】（为《21st Century》报写文章）Another plan is that I want to do something for Project Hope．I'll call on people to donate their clothes，stationery and money to Project Hope．I'm going to help poor children have chances to go to school．（（为希望工程做点事）As for my last plan，I'll work harder at my lessons when I'm at high school．I'll do my best to become a good student．（升入高中后，更努力学习，成为一名优秀学生）
That's all．Thank you．

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．