Question

12．假设你是叶伟，请你根据所给信息提示给你在美国的笔友James写信，介绍你的学习和生活．要求呈现所有要点、语法正确、语言流畅、语意通顺、上下文连贯、书写工整．字数：70-80词

Dear James， Thanks for your letter．Do you want to know something about my life？ I have a regular and busy daily life on weekdays．I get up early at about 6：00 in the morning．After breakfast，I go to school by bike．We usually have a morning class and four classes in the morning，four classes in the afternoon．I take an active part in the after-school activities．I usually play football with my friends for about an hour then I go home．After supper I do my homework，then I surf the internet and listen to some music．On weekends，I usually visit my friends and grandparents．Sometimes I go to movies with my parents． Best wishes， Ye Wei

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①Do you want to know something about my life，你想知道一些关于我的生活吗．句子中want to do sth表示想做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式形式．
②I take an active part in the after-school activities．我积极参加课外活动．句子中take an active part in 表示积极参加，after-school activities表示课外活动．

解答 Dear James，
Thanks for your letter．Do you want to know something about my life（高分句型）？（引出话题）
I have a regular and busy daily life on weekdays．（什么样的学习和生活） I get up early at about 6：00 in the morning．After breakfast，I go to school by bike．We usually have a morning class and four classes in the morning，four classes in the afternoon．I take an active part in the after-school activities（高分句型）．I usually play football with my friends for about an hour then I go home．After supper I do my homework，then I surf the internet and listen to some music．On weekends，I usually visit my friends and grandparents．Sometimes I go to movies with my parents．（具体介绍我的学习和生活）
Best wishes，
Ye Wei

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．