Question

7．根据提示内容，写一篇80词左右的短文，首句已经给出不计入总词数．
要求：1．姓名：Joy Smith
2．年龄：14
3．生日：十月一日
4．家庭成员：爷爷奶奶，爸爸妈妈，一个妹妹
5．好朋友：Mary and Jim
6．爱好：包括运动，食物，学习科目及其原因
I have a friend．His name is Joy Smith，he is 14 years old，his birthday is on October 1st，there are six people in his family，his grandparents，his parents，his sister and he．He has two good friends，they are Mary and Jim，they are in the same class．He likes sports，he likes playing basketball and he oftens plays basketball after shcool with his friends．He likes healthy food such as fruits and vegetables．His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is interesting．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
there are six people in his family．他家有六口人．这是一个there be句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is interesting．他最喜欢的科目是英语，因为他认为它很有趣．这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…．

解答 His name is Joy Smith【要点一，姓名】，he is 14 years old【要点二，年龄】，his birthday is on October 1st【要点三，生日】，there are six people in his family【高分句型一，注意there be句型的使用】，his grandparents，his parents，his sister and he【要点四，家庭成员】．He has two good friends，they are Mary and Jim，they are in the same class．【要点五，好朋友】He likes sports，he likes playing basketball and he oftens plays basketball after school with his friends．He likes healthy food such as fruits and vegetables．His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is interesting【高分句型二，注意状语从句的使用】．【要点六，爱好】

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．