Question

16．最近，苏州日报开展中学生英语作文大赛，主题是我的家乡-苏州，你也想参赛，请根据以下要点，写一篇80字左右的文章，标题已给出．
1，它是个历史悠久的大城市，以园林和丝绸（silk）而出名．
2，它有5个区（district）组成，桥多，河流多．
3，过去道路狭窄，人们步行或乘船出行．
 4，这些年来，苏州已经发生了巨大的变化…（请写出一个变化）
 5，苏州人热爱大自然，保护环境，力争把家乡变成国际化大城市．
 6，苏州一年四季都很美，它是居住的好地方．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In the past，the roads were so narrow that people went outside only on foot or by boat．
句中涉及的结构为"so…that…如此…以致于…"，这句话意为：在过去道路是如此的狭窄，人们只能步行或乘船出行．
高分句型二：
We try to make our hometown an international city．
句中涉及的短语有："try to do sth  努力做某事"；"make sb/sth+名词/形容词 使…成为…"．这句话意为：我们努力把家乡变成国际化城市．

解答 My hometown Suzhou is a big city with a long history．It is famous for its gardens and silk．It is made up of five districts．There are many rivers and bridges in Suzhou．（介绍苏州文化）
   In the past，the roads were so narrow that people went outside only on foot or by boat．【高分句型一】But Suzhou has changed a lot over the years．Now we can see wide and clean roads with many trees on both sides．There are many tall buildings everywhere．（苏州的变化）
   People here love the natural beauty and we also protect the environment．We try to make our hometown an international city．【高分句型二】Suzhou is beautiful in any season，so I think it's a good place to live．（苏州的环境）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．