Question

15．请你根据下表中所提供的信息以"Learn to express thanks"为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿．

背    景	1认为上中学时吃好穿好是应该的； 2走向社会后没有感恩意识．
学会感恩	1感谢社会提供良好的教育机会； 2感谢父母供养自己上学； 3感谢老师传授知识； 4感谢朋友的支持与鼓励．

参考词汇：enter society 进入社会，sense of thanks 感恩意识，behavior 行为
要求：1短文应包括所提供的所有内容，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；
2演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息；
3词数：80词左右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Good morning，boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is"Learn to express thanks"．We find most Middle School students don't show any sense of"Thanks"．They think that they are certain of eating well and wearing fashionableclothes．
As Middle School students，we should learn toexpress thanks．The society offers us a chance to receive good education．We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school．And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us muchknowledge．Besides，our friends always give us encouragement and help．
In a word，we are lucky in everything．But weshould learn to express thanks．
In the future，we should never forget our society，parents，teachers and so on．At present，we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful．
Thank you for your listening!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以"Learn to express thanks"为题说说如今的中学生的感恩意识并建议应该学会感恩．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1背景：
（1）认为上中学时吃好穿好是应该的；
（2）走向社会后没有感恩意识．
2学会感恩：
（1）感谢社会提供良好的教育机会；
（2）感谢父母供养自己上学；
（3）感谢老师传授知识；
（4）感谢朋友的支持与鼓励

常用到的重点短语：
offer sb sth给某人提供某物
thank sb for…因为…感谢某人
support sb to do sth支持某人做某事
besides另外
in a word总之

高分句型：
1．We should①thank our parents for②supporting us to go to school．
①thank sb for…因为…感谢某人，for是介词，后加名词代词或动名词．
②support sb to do sth支持某人做某事
2．And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us much knowledge．
who teach us much knowledge是定语从句，修饰先行词teachers，关系词who作为从句的主语，不可省略．

解答 Good morning，boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is"Learn toexpress thanks"．We find most Middle School students don't show any sense of"Thanks"（没有感恩意识）．They think that they are certain of eating well and wearing fashionable clothes（认为上中学时吃好穿好是应该的）．
As Middle School students，we should learn to express thanks．The society offers us a chance to receive good education．（感谢社会）We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school．（高分句型）（感谢父母）And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us much knowledge．（高分句型）（感谢老师）Besides，our friends always give us encouragement and help．（感谢朋友）
In a word，we are lucky in everything．But we should learn to express thanks．In the future，I should study harder to repayour parents and teachers．I should go to my friends to share their happinessand sadness．
Thank you for your listening!

点评 本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈关于假期的问题．要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多，注意将提示的要点表达清楚，并发表自己的观点．注意主谓一致问题．写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，如宾语从句，条件状语从句等．注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用．内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．