Question

【题目】作文 （本大题共10分）

请根据提示内容，以“My ideal school”为题，描述你理想中的学校。词数80左右。

内容要点如下：

1. 早上9点上学，所以不必很早起床；

2. 每天仅有一小时的作业，有很多时间从事课外活动；

3. 学校餐厅干净明亮，我们一起吃饭、聊天很开心；

4. 图书馆里藏书万册，我们喜欢课后讨论各种书籍；

5. 每学期学校举行一次外出游玩，我认为......(适当发挥1句)

My ideal school

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Answer 1

【答案】

My ideal school

We go to school at nine in the morning. So we don’t need to get up early. We have only an hour of homework, and we have much time for after-school activities. Our school dining hall is clean and bright. We have fun having lunch and chatting together there. There is a library in our school. It has about ten thousand books in it and we like discussing all kinds of books after class. We have a school trip every term. I think our school life is colourful.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。