Question

12．下列图片提供了上周星期五李明的有关情况，请据此以第三人称形式，写一篇80词左右的短文．
要求：1短文应体现图片基本信息，可适当发挥；
2语句通顺、意思连贯；
3文中不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名．
Last Friday，the teacher asked students wrote a composition about doing housework．Li Ming never did housework，so he decided to do some housework at home．
After school，Li Ming went back home．When he swept the floor，his grandmother immediately came and said，"My baby，stop sweeping the floor，or you will be tired"．Li Ming had to give the broom to his grandma．Then when he cleaned the windows，his grandfather found that and said，"My baby，stop cleaning the windows，or you will be tired．"Li Ming had to give up cleaning the window．Whatever Li Ming did，his grandparents would stop him，because they were afraid that Li Ming was tired．Li Ming did nothing．
On the next Monday，Li Ming handed in a composition writing that my grandparents didn't have me do housework in case I was too tired．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是根据图画描述上周星期五李明的有关情况，时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
描述图画；第一幅图：老师布置作业说，每人写一篇干家务的文章
第二幅图：李明在除草的时候被奶奶看见了，奶奶急忙跑过来说，乖孙子，别累坏了，让奶奶干．
第三幅图：李明在擦玻璃的时候被爷爷看见了，爷爷急忙跑过来说，乖孙子，别累坏了，让爷爷干．
第四幅图：老师看见李明的作业是这样写的：我爷爷奶奶怕我累坏了，不让我干家务．
 
常用到的重点短语：
ask sb do sth 让某人做某事
decide to do sth 决定做某事
stop doing sth 停止做某事
give up 放弃
hand in 上交

【高分句型】
1．①When he swept the floor，his grandmother immediately came and said，"My baby，②stop sweeping the floor，③or you will be tired"
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②stop doing sth 停止做某事
③祈使句+or+陈述句结构，在这里祈使句相当于if 引导的条件状语从句（但此时去掉or）or表示否则．
2．①Whatever Li Ming did，his grandparents would stop him，②because they were afraid③that Li Ming was tired．
①whatever引导的让步状语从句．
②because引导的原因状语从句
③that引导的宾语从句．
3．On the next Monday，Li Ming handed in a composition①writing②that my grandparents didn't have me do housework ③in case I was too tired．
①动名词做伴随状语．
②that引导的宾语从句，作为write的宾语．
③in case万一，引导的条件状语从句．

解答 Last Friday，the teacher asked students wrote a composition about doing housework．（第一幅图）Li Ming never did housework，so he decided to do some housework at home．
After school，Li Ming went back home．When he swept the floor，his grandmother immediately came and said，"My baby，stop sweeping the floor，or you will be tired"【高分句型】．Li Ming had to give the broom to his grandma．（第二幅图）Then when he cleaned the windows，his grandfather found that and said，"My baby，stop cleaning the windows，or you will be tired．"Li Ming had to give up cleaning the window．．（第三幅图）Whatever Li Ming did，his grandparents would stop him，because they were afraid that Li Ming was tired【高分句型】．Li Ming did nothing．
On the next Monday，Li Ming handed in a composition writing that my grandparents didn't have me do housework in case I was too tired【高分句型】（第四幅图）．

点评 写作时要注意一些几点：
（1）应抓住文章中心，围绕主题，根据提示列出要写的信息要点．
（2）注意内容是否充实、积极和健康．
（3）注意文章的结构层次，要凸显文章的主题．
（4）要注意语言规范，表达准确，选材造句都尽量使用学过、见过的语言材料．