Question

1．下面四幅图画描述了你某天放学后发生的一件事．请你根据这些图画提示，展开合理想象，用英语写一篇日记，时间是2012年5月11日，星期五，天气预报：有雨．
注意：
1．词数90左右．日记的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
2．要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯．
3．文中不得使用真实的人名、校名．

May 11，2012    Friday                                             rainy
This afternoon，when I walked out of school，the weather changed．There were thick dark clouds in the sky．I began to feel worried because I didn't bring an umbrella or raincoat with me when I left home in the morning．It soon started to rain．When I was hurrying home，I heard someone calling me from behind．I turned round and saw it was Li Ping．He had an umbrella and asked me to share it with him．He walked all the way with me until I got home．How thankful I was for his kindness!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是根据图片写一篇日记讲述某天放学后发生的一件事，注意日记的格式．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一，三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．时间是2012年5月11日，星期五，天气预报：有雨
2．描述图画；乌云密布十分担心，路上开始下雨，同学和我一起撑伞回家，表示感谢
常用到的重点短语：
begin to do sth 开始做某事
hear sb doing sth 听见某人正在做某事
turn round 转身
share sth with sb 与某人分享某物
【高分句型】
1．I began to feel worried ①because I didn't bring an umbrella or raincoat with me ②when I left home in the morning．
①because引导的原因状语从句．
②when引导的时间状语从句．
2．He walked all the way with me until I got home．
until引导的时间状语从句．
3．How thankful I was for his kindness!
感叹句：How+adj+主语+谓语+其他！

解答 May 11，2012    Friday                                             rainy
    This afternoon，when I walked out of school，the weather changed．There were thick dark clouds in the sky．I began to feel worried because I didn't bring an umbrella or raincoat with me when I left home in the morning．【高分句型】（第一幅图，感到担心）It soon started to rain．（第二幅图，开始下雨）When I was hurrying home，I heard someone calling me from behind．I turned round and saw it was Li Ping．He had an umbrella and asked me to share it with him．（第三幅图，一起撑伞）He walked all the way with me until I got home．【高分句型】How thankful I was for his kindness!【高分句型】（第四幅图，表示感谢）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，本题材料是四幅图画．动笔前应认真看图，了解图画内容，展开合理想象．然后根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题．根据内容可知本文人称以第一人称较多，时态一般应该用一般过去时．要注意语言规范，表达准确，选材造句都尽量使用学过、见过的语言材料．