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11．现在越来越多的学生使用和带手机进入校园，中学生是否应该带手机进入校园，为此学生们展开了讨论．  赞成意见：1现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一．2应充分利用好手机．如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助．3可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己．
反对意见：1学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多．2若课堂接听手机会影响上课．3学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习．4我们要拒绝成为低头族．stop phubbing 不做低头族
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  Is mobile good for student？
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students．but every coin has two sides．                                     

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
If we are in danger by chance，we can use phones to ask for help如果我们偶然处于危险中，我们能用手机求助．
if引导的条件状语从句．
【高分句型二】
What's more，many students spend so much time in playing games on the phones that they can not listen to teachers well再者，许多学生花那么多的时间在手机上玩游戏以至于不能好好听讲．
so…that从句：如此…以至于．

解答 Is mobile good for student？
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students，but every coin has two sides．almost everyone has a mobile phone．However，is it good  for students？
   Some people think it's  good for students to take phones to school．As we know，the 21st century is a modern age and full of information．A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information．If we are in danger by chance，we can use phones to ask for help．【高分句型一】What's more，our parents and friends can communicate with us by phones wherever we are．After class，we can play games on phone to relax．（ 赞成意见）
   However，many people are against taking  phones to school，especially teachers．Many teachers think that most of students often send messages by phones during the class．What's more，many students spend so much time in playing games on the phones that they can not listen to teachers well，【高分句型二】it's bad for their study．At the same time，it costs much money．There are public phones in school．Even worse，when some people cross the street，they still concentrate on their mobile phones，which can easily cause traffic accidents．They should refuse to be phubbers．（反对意见）
   In my opinion，the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way．

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