Question

【题目】书面表达。（15分）

请根据下面的提示内容，以 Healthy Eating 为题写一篇短文，谈谈你对健康饮食的看法。70词左右。

提示：1. 很多学生喜欢吃汉堡包、炸薯条、炸鸡等快餐（fast food）；

2. 快餐对身体健康有害，经常吃快餐容易变肥胖（overweight）；

3. 良好的饮食和健康的饮食习惯很重要。

提示词：hamburger, French fries, fried chicken, diet, eating habit

Healthy Eating

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Answer 1

【答案】

Healthy Eating

Many students like eating fast food, such as hamburgers, French fries and fried chicken. They think fast food tastes very delicious. But they don’t know it is bad for their health. If someone eats fast food for a long time, he will become overweight easily. I think it’s very important for us to have a good diet and a healthy eating habit. We should eat different kinds of foods. We’d better eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. In short, we should eat not only our favorite food but also other healthy food.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是围绕健康饮食展开叙述，首先应该说明健康饮食的重要性，然后，分别叙述如何才能保持健康。最后，要发出倡议，号召大家保持健康饮食。在写作时，时态一般应该用一般现在时。应该尽量包括文中提示的内容，可稍加拓展。

写作亮点：本文属于半开放性作文，同时文章和考生的实际结合紧密，考生有话可说，有理可写。文章的要点并不清楚，给考生留下的发挥空间较大，在写作时可以利用较复杂的句式，也可以使用高级词汇和适当的连接词让文章更流畅。这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如But they don’t know it is bad for their health； We’d better eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. 等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。