Question

【题目】书面表达（20分）

请以 My Hometown 为题，写一篇短文。要求包括以下要点，可以适当发挥。但不要逐句翻译。词数70字左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

要点: 1. 小镇不大，离成都很近，但环境整洁，树木林立，河水清澈，空气清新。

2. 这里有4座大桥和一些现代化的建筑。

3. 有一个购物中心和2个大型超市，有运动场地，人们无论老少，都喜欢在这里活动。

4. 我最喜欢的地方是……,

5. 人们互相认识，非常友好，这里的确是个居住的好方。

My hometown

I’m glad to show you around my hometown.___________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

My hometown

I’m glad to show you around my hometown.My Hometown

My hometown is a beautiful small town. It is very close to Chengdu.

The environment is neat . The river is clear. The air is fresh. There are many green trees and flowers here. We can hear the birds singing and smell the flowers.

There are four bridges and some modern buildings in the town. There is a shopping center and two large supermarkets. There are some sports venues. People, both young and old, like to play here. My favourite place is the shopping center.

People here are helpful and kind. It is a good place to live in. I hope my hometown will be better.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇给材料的作文，让学生介绍自己家乡。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：该文语句通顺，段落清晰，表达了题目所给出的各个要点。短文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩如： We can hear the birds singing and smell the flowers. I hope my hometown will be better.等等。