Question

【题目】书面表达（15分）

以“My Ideal Home”为题写一篇短文，向你的朋友介绍你的理想家园。

提示：1.理想家园的总体概况。

2.理想家园共有几层及每层的设施。

My Ideal Home

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My Ideal Home

Everyone has an ideal home. I also have one. My ideal home is very big. It has three floors with a beautiful garden behind it. On the ground floor, there is a sitting room and a KTV room, because I love singing very much. On the first floor, I have a nice bathroom and I can have a bath comfortably. And I study and sleep on the second floor. It’s quiet here.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，介绍你的理想家园。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Everyone has...，It has...，there is...，And I study...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意连词的运用，文章连贯、通顺。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我有一个理想的家园，接下来介绍我的理想家园的位置、层次和设施，最后介绍自己在理想的家园所做的事。此处on the ground floor, sitting room, love doing sth, have a bath等这些词组的运用和介词短语with a beautiful garden behind it作后置定语也让文章增色不少。