Question

【题目】书面表达（共1题，满分15分）

下周班会，英语老师要求每个同学写一篇发言稿，分享一下学习英语的经验。你可以谈谈对英语学习的认识、你的学习方法以及你的要求和建议。请根据下列提示词写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示词：important, useful, improve, listen, practice

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone! I think English is widely used and useful in the world. It’s important for us to learn it well.

I am interested in English. But at the beginning, I was weak in it. With the help of my teacher and classmates, I have made great progress. I did a lot to improve my English. First, I listened to my teacher carefully at class and made some notes so that I could review my lessons after class. Second, I practiced listening and speaking a lot. I was not afraid of making mistakes. I also tried to read more English magazines and stories.

I hope my English teacher can hold some English parties and an English corner for us. I also hope we can listen to some beautiful English songs after class.

Then I’m sure we will make great progress in learning English.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如I did a lot to improve my English. practiced listening and speaking a lot.等，But at the beginning,等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。