Question

【题目】书面表达。（共1题，计10分）

假如你是Peter， 根据表格信息介绍你自己的情况，开头已给出，不算入字数。要求：语句通顺，结构合理，可适当发挥。词数：60-80词左右。

Name: Peter	Age(年龄): 13
Nationality(国籍): Chinese	School: Qujiang No.1 High School
Family: parents, sister and I	Likes(喜欢): play soccer
Dislikes(不喜欢): watch TV	Tel: 87876556

My name is Peter.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My name is Peter. I am 13 years old. I am a Chinese boy. I study at Qujiang No.1 High School. There are four people in my family, my parents , my sister and I. I like playing soccer. I think playing soccer is very interesting. But I don’t like watching TV, because it is boring. My telephone number is 87876556. If you want to make friends with me, you can call me.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，Peter的自我介绍。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is……，I am ...，There are ...，I think ...，But I don’t like...以及If you want ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，完整地表达提纲中所列内容。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的名字叫Peter，接下来介绍我的年龄、国籍、所在学校、家人和喜好，最后介绍自己的电话号码，希望有人打电话和我交朋友。此处like doing sth, play soccer, watch TV, want to do sth, make friends with sb等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。