Question

3．今春我省部分地区发生干旱，水资源严重短缺．请你以Saving Water为题用英语写一篇短文．（参考词 tap 水龙头 reuse 再利用 recycle 再循环 drought 干旱）内容包括：1．水的重要性  2．人们浪费水的不良现象  3．提出几条建议
  要求：1．词数：80-100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2．字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰．

Saving  Water

As we all know，water is important to us all．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文，要求是以Saving Water为题用英语写一篇短文，这类话题是学生常见的话题，写起来较为简单，内容包括：1．水的重要性．2．浪费水的不良现象．3．建议或意见．人称应该以we来写，时态是一般现在时，在写建议或意见时，要注意情态动词的使用．

解答 As we all know，water is important to us all．People can't live without water．Plants and animals will die if there is no water in the world．
   But there are still some people wasting water．For example，some students often forget to turn off the taps； some people take showers for a long time．  
   Then what should we do to save water？First，we should turn off the taps after we use it．Second，we'd better recycle and reuse the water．Third，we should take a bath instead of having a shower．
   Water is really important to man．Let's save water from now on．

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头已经给出．本作文中给出的要点比较明晰，动笔前先要围绕这三个要点组织材料，确定写作内容．同时还要注意准确运用时态和人称，适当使用情态动词can/should等能让文章更出彩．