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8．假定你是李华，看到班上有部分同学在完成作业时，不是自己独立完成而是抄袭他人的作业．针对这种现象，请你以My opinions on copying others'homework为题谈谈自己的看法．
注意：1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥； 
2．短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3．词数：80左右．

Reasons	difficult and too much
	lazy and no interest
	…
Effect	against the school rules
Solutions	study hard
	ask…for help
Opinions	…

My opinion on copying others'homework
 
It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．There are several reasons for this phenomenon．The main reason is that a large amount of homework which is difficult to work out needs to be done everyday．Although copying others'homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finish the endless exercises，in fact，it really does harm to us students in terms of getting into a bad habit of being lazy to think over difficult questions．
As far as I am concerned，as a student，we should not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well．If we have difficulties，we can ask our teachers and classmates for help．
We should work hard to gain knowledge．Let's do our best to prevent such bad behavior from spreading．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以"My opinion on copying others'homework"为题说说抄袭作业的原因和危害．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．主要原因；作业多，难，懒惰
2．影响：违反学校规则
3．解决办法；努力学习，寻求帮忙
4．你的看法

常用到的重点短语：
work out 解答出
do sb a favor 帮忙
stay up 熬夜
do harm to 对…有害
not only…but …不仅…而且…

【高分句型】
1．It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．
it作为形式主语，that从句作为真正主语
2．The main reason is①that alarge amount of homework ②which is difficult to work out needs to be done everyday．
①that从句作为表语，和is构成系表结构
②which是关系词的定语从句，which作为主语，修饰先行词homework．
3．①As far as I am concerned，as a student，we should②not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well．
①As far as I am concerned 就我而言
②not only…but …不仅…而且…连接前后两个对等成分

解答 My opinion on copying others'homework
It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．【高分句型】There are several reasons for this phenomenon．The main reason is that a large amount of homework which is difficult to work out needs to be done everyday．（主要原因；作业多，难，）【高分句型】Although copying others'homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finish the endless exercises，in fact，it really does harm to us students in terms of getting into a bad habit of being lazy to think over difficult questions．（影响；养成坏习惯，违反规则）
As far as I am concerned，as a student，we should not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well．【高分句型】If we have difficulties，we can ask our teachers and classmates for help．（解决办法；努力学习，寻求帮忙）
We should work hard to gain knowledge．Let's do our best to prevent such bad behavior from spreading．（我的看法）

点评 这是一篇提纲作文，文章的题目已经给出，而且列出了三条细节．写作文时要仔细审题，每一条都要写到．要注意前后句的连接，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题．写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
文章主要写我对抄袭作业的看法，要点全部都写出，并且增加了一些内容使文章更通顺，更符合要求．文中使用很多短语，让文章更加出彩，如It is known to us all that，a large amount of．，stay up late等．在平时的学习中，要注意点滴积累，这样在写作文时才能灵活运用．