Question

文段表达。（共15分）

根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

每个人在自己的生活中都会遇到一个对自己影响至深的人,如：家人、老师、同学、朋友……

现在，某英文报纸正在开展题为“The important person in my life” 的征文活动。请你投稿，稿件内容包括：你生活中最重要的那个人是谁？描述一件发生在你们之间的事儿, 并谈谈你的感受。

提示词语：important person, remember, help, wonderful, think

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I deeply believe that everyone has their most important people in their lifetime. For me, that's my classmate, Tom.

I still remember that once my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks. While I was worrying about school work at home, my classmate Tom came to help me. He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. I was glad that I caught up with my classmates.

From then on, we became best friends. I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于开放性文体，能够很大程度上调动学生的想象空间，学生可以结合自己的经历，首先对每个人在他们心中都有一个重要的人物，这个现象进行肯定，接下来结合自己的一次经历，说明他是如何帮助我的，如何给了最深的印象。最后对自己所经历的事情的感受进行描写。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：初中英语的作文，出考察学生连词成句的能力外，还要求学生能够变换句式，学会用不同的表达，来表达同一个意思，要在“准”字和“美”上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面，同时要学会多用副词来修饰谓语动词，这样显示出深厚的语言根底。对于初三的作文，在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。