Question

文段表达。（共15分）

根据中文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。（请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。）

在和谐社会里，人与人之间的互帮互助已经构成了我们生活中的重要组成部分。请你描述一个帮助过你或者你帮助过的人和事，并谈谈感想。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I'll never forget the person who helped meThe person I shall never forget is my junior high English teacher, Linda.She speaks beautiful English and she's very kind and friendly. She helped me a lot in my English learning. She always encouraged us to practise more. We often did pair work, group work, discussions and reports. She also brought us a lot of really nice English songs and chants. We never found it boring to learn English. As a result, I made great progress in English. What's more, I really enjoy learning English.I'll never forget Linda who helped me in my English study and I'll try to help others as much as I can like Linda.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。

考点：命题作文的写作

点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。