Question

【题目】请你根据以下内容提示，为学校英语与栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在你班同学刘奥身上的一 件事。

(1)上周五放学后刘奥乘高铁去北京，看到有一男子在高铁上抢占一位女士的靠窗座 位而不坐自己的座位。

(2)刘奥劝说这位男子回到他自己的座位，但遭到了拒绝。

(3)乘客用手机拍了照片，发布到网上。

(4)老师知道后表扬了刘奥，刘奥说制止这种不文明行为是他的职责。

(5)你觉得……

参考词汇: 高铁 high-speed train

抢占某人的靠窗座位 grab(grabbed, grabbing) someone's window seat

劝说某人做某事 persuade sb. to do sth.

不文明的uncivilized

要求：

(1). 词数：80～100 个。

(2). 短文的题目和开头已给出，丌计入总词数。

(3). 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

When Liu Ao took the high-speed train to Beijing after school last Friday,

Answer 1

【答案】When Liu Ao took thehigh-speed train to Beijing after school last Friday,he saw a man grabbing a woman’s window seat instead of sitting on his own. He tried to persuade the man to return to his seat, but the man refused. The passengers took photos on their mobile phones and posted them online.

The teacher praised Liu Ao when he knew it. Liu said it was his duty to stop such uncivilized behavior. I think we should learn from Liu Ao. When we meet some uncivilized acts in our life, we should stop them in time.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，文中所给材料比较详细；动笔之前根据所给材料组织语言，确定句子的时态，这里用一般过去时态，人称是第三人称单数，注意内容表达清楚，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不要出现单词拼写错误。相信只要平时多积累，就能获得满意的作文。